This is the improved version (not the final one yet) taking in consideration the comments I received from my peers.
The Forgotten Hero - Animation_V_15 from dov vishniya on Vimeo.
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This is the improved version (not the final one yet) taking in consideration the comments I received from my peers.
The Forgotten Hero - Animation_V_15 from dov vishniya on Vimeo.
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Having seen your piece projected on the screen at university some things stand out that might need some work if you have time, the main one being camera moves. That opening shot of your main character walking on the street needs a smoother path, it feels like somebody is playing a computer game at this point rather than something that is 'cinematic', it then cuts to a static shot of the alley, is there going to be a dissolve between these shots? The transition between the two shots needs to be smoother, it's a shame you couldn't have the alley scene a continuation of the opening scene. Just be aware of camera moves and ramping, it can really jar at times on an audience but maybe this was something you were aiming for?
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